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[lastbreath]

baca dulu hu
kripik sarannya belakangan wkwk

 

[kezia789]

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[diditbangkong]

Lanjuy suhu

 

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[RebelionZ]

Bagus ceritanya tapi.........................


Updatenya kenapa dikit banget

 

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[EnHa93]

thanks up nya hu.

 

[w13r]

"Apakah suatu saat nanti ia akan menemukan kebahagiaan?"

Entahlah karena jalan hidupnya masih akan panjang kedepannya.....

Agak bingung dengan kalimat penutup eps 1 ini. Bukankah scene febri dikasih ayahnya ke lintah darat itu flashback ya? Dan sekarang udh diselametin sama devin?

Butuh pencerahan

 

[kezia789]

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[w13r]

Oke noted suhu, keren ini berati alurnya maju mundur. Eh ada ya sinetron judulnya itu? Haha

 

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[Kadalilang]

Lanjut dong om penasaran nih

 

[lastbreath]

Yups bener suhu nanti aku ngolah part 2 tentang kehidupan febri dulu flashback hehhehe..
Iya ada suhu di **tv hehehehehe
Beda disitu yang mati cowoknya hahahahaa ups...

brrti dsini nanti ada cewek yg mati ya hu? spoiler nih... wkwkwkwk
lanjut hu, saran sih, untuk scene flashbacknya, di kasih tanda yg agak gedean hu. sbenernya sih ini gak trrlu masalah, cma biar enak+rapi aja sih.. hihihi

 

[Mbuhkah]

Ijin baca dulu suhu..
Semoga bisa selesai sampai tamat..
Selamat berkarya..

 

[D 805 KI]

.. Izin nyimak smbil.. Ngeroko , om

 

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[lastbreath]

Yups bener suhu
Hehehehehe
Ok suhu noted nanti malam aku rapiin dulu sebenarnya nanti aku tambahin mulutrasinya juga...

siap suhu.. mulustrasi nya cari yg mulus2 ya hu

 

[javiermartinez]

Daaannn... Sebuah cerita baru dimulai.
Semoga gak rawan macet sampai tamat.

 

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