CERBUNG - TAMAT Safira Yang Terdalam

[Tomantus]

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[hijabboobs]

dinantikan kelanjutannyaa huu

 

[YOga01]

Lanjutkan hu

 

[hans_kurniawan]

pasang tenda dulu

 

[bona_bona]

wahhh... seru niiihhhh....

 

[eros201220]

Jadi bersambung apa udah tamat hu... Kontradiktif nih... Btw ceritanya bagus...

 

[Tomantus]

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[Shoey]

Cuma kurang mulustrasi aja. Sisanya LANJUTKAN!!

 

[Putraaaat]

Titip sendal

 

[adiloojaurda]

Parkir......dulu

 

[adakodok]

parkir huuu

 

[MamadGo]

Kayanya tema nya ok... Cuma masi bingung bacanya karena kurang rapih aja...

Coba dibikin paragraf nya jelas,, ada spasi sebagai pemisah paragraf,, terus kalimat percakapan pake tanda kutip, jangan pake pake tanda bintang...

 

[James_bondd]

Lanjut lagi suhu

 

[Tomantus]

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[putraasmara]

ditunggu lanjutannya huu

 

[Fikury]

Wah mantab lanjutkeun !!!

 

[reg2]

Mantab lah om ts masih mau kasih isi kepalanya buat kita

Makasih suhu

 

[pranata0404]

Wadaw... Cekidot