CERBUNG Mimpi Buruk Lona

[dwcok]

lon alon ae hu... yg penting updatenya kuduh sippp....

 

[deskman]

Lona ku menunggu

 

[Geri45]

Lona mah pasti pura pura tapi doyannnn

 

[adiandra]

lona.. update dong

 

[Ace mad]

kapan dilanjut lagi gan

 

[manfromearth]

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[apocad46]

Krna cerita berubah alur dr cerita awal kyknya rd mandeg ni hu... Lona akhirnya jd budak nafsu dst dll.. Cerita awal pdhl lebih personal hanya mertua n menantu aja.. Lebih kerasa pdhl hehe... Opini penikmat aja ya ini mah.. Semangat!!

hahaha.. iya, cerita awal seharusnya lebih personal aja, main eksib2 dikit ke jagat,tidak harus dihajar jagat langsung, tapi emang buat karya kaya gini susaaaahhhhhh.. yg suhu suhu ini keren, bisa nulis, pernah nyuba tapi tetep stag ditengah.. anyway, sekalian pasang tenda hu.. keep up the good work... btw referensi jav kaya gini banyak, cb aja dicari yang pas dan dituangkan ke tulisan. ato sedikit refrensi, "pengakuan istriku" itu bagus...

 

[Jampun]

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[adiandra]

lona... update...lona

 

[Jongacengan]

sayang kalo mandeg... o(╥﹏╥)o

 

[romulus167]

ninggal jejak ahh mantaf kali ceritanya

 

[BuLianshi]

lanjut lona

 

[iandeleonph1]

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[Fradhani]

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[k1n6k0n6]

Kangen Lona.....

 

[aldi789]

dimanakah dirimu lonaaa?

 

[mas jos]

Lona dimana dirimu

 

[lagayae]

lona dah ngaceng nih

 

[mendemciu]

Macet ya..

 

[Aquererra]

lanjut dong suhu