DRAMA A dance with misery

[N4ITO]

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[debu_karpet]

Nunggu updatean.... lagi banyak-banyaknya nih.... semoga bisa meledak malam ini

 

[cumabuatisengserius]

Btw di cerita ini viny di awal beneran msh virgin/nga thor?

 

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[akira378]

Selalu ya motongnya pas mau klimaks ceritanya.

 

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[Downsaw]

Gua kira bakal ngewe ama melodi

 

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[cumabuatisengserius]

Aih pake misteri segala wkwkwk. Lagian dri cara viny ngegoda beni udh brpengalaman,tapi pas dihajar reaksi viny kek virgin apa itu cuma gimmick doang suhu?

 

[cumabuatisengserius]

Dan please suhu jangan bikin adegan apa2 ttg anak team T. Gua nonton mereka tiater aja kadang2 ga tega,masih polos semua mukanya

 

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[bathingape23]

kok nais story yaa, keep the good work suhuu

 

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[aremafirma]

Nice update jadi makin penasaran sama kelanjutannya

 

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[MangUjangGarisKeras]

Update nya gk ketauan tiba² ada di spoiler wkwkwkw

 

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[debu_karpet]

Gue berharap ada lebih banyak orang yang baca cerita ini. Tapi mungkin ceritanya belum cukup bagus. Wkwkwk.

Cerita udah ok banget menurut gw. Gak ada yang perlu dikomentari. Cuma pengemasannya kurang bagus aja menurut gw...

Kalau bisa dibuat lebih menarik aja secara tampilannya. Coba kasih gambar ilustrasi biar tampilannya gak monoton

 

[Lugu05]

mantablah..., btw di spoiler gitu emang rapi, tapi yg baca jadi ngira belum update karena gak lihat, lebih baik kalo dispoiler dikasih pemberitahuan kalo udah update